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I do apologize for the delay. My router decided to screw me over and deny me the access to the internet for more than a week.
Well now that everything is all right and fixed I must congratulate you on Discord. I found myself rolling my eyes when I realized this is going to be one of those chapters. However, you manged to do the same thing as the season 4 finale did.
Though I had the impending desire to hit him in the face with a sledgehammer, you managedt convey the more ... caring side to him. Much like the development he got in the show. He still iritates me though, despite a rather nice Happy Wheels reference. I would still give him a few good bashes, just to be sure his gears are running smoothly.
It makes me wonder actually. Luna is the goddes of dreams, she must be really kind not to take advantage of that to mess with Discord the same way he messes with the rest of Equestria. It would be most entertaining to see her turn him into a cute little parasprite and use him to learn how to play baseball. Oh well, we all have our dreams.
In Bed 
I see this the last chapter so far. Well take your time, I think I already demonstrated I am a patient man. We still have the most passionate part to reach. That alone is going to be worth all the wait.